Thursday, November 26, 2009

WEEK 8

1. the main idea is beauty and the way it is shown in the media
2. some details that support main idea is how Womans magazine is tells and explains how 2 loose weight, it puts a thought in a girls mind that maybe i should loose weigth when shes already skinny another example is that models and actors on tv are always skinny and its putting a bad thought on girls
3.its just shows that no one is perfect and its very hard to survive and maintain that skinny unless ur a workoutaholic
4i think people should be portrayed as an average sized american woman betwen the sizes of 12 to 15

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

the topic is stopping of violence
the main idea is stopping of violence in schools
one of the supporting details that support the main idea is how measures have been taken into school to provent violence like they look closely at students with mental-health problems or someone who is socially isolated from students also they make building at some schools closes as if you have to swipe a car to go int o certain building
some warning signs are not taking cristism very well, social isolation, and low self-esteem
security measures ive seen on campus are that secruity is always right around the corner and cops are potroling around here